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Fingers *Shakiness Intensifies*


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Ahhhhh this is late. Super late but Imma try critiquing still ; u ;

I'm with Cen. I really love your attention to detail with the shading with everything. I also quite like the knot you drew there as part of the ribbon on her bust. Again, it's so detailed. Keep up the good work with that. 

I do think that it would look much better if you got to work on proportions a bit more. I find that her waist is too thin given the rest of her proportions. Oh and the lack of visible ears kinda threw me off too. In a way, your art reminds me of all my previous drawings (barely any ears, always hidden hands, and really thin waists). Haha. But at the same time, you pay more attention to shading and detail than me so I think you'll be able to do so much better as long as you start referencing from real life to be able to improve your art further. ; u ;